高中英语写作基础训练--My Friend_图文

Basic Training For English Writing
高中英语写作基础训练--My Friend

Warming up :
Guessing Game

I have a good friend. He was brave and kind. He was an excellent general during the Three Kingdoms. He was easygoing and got on well with his leaders. Everyone in Ding Zhou respects(尊敬) him.

三国勇将俏赵云 长坂坡上救阿斗 定州百姓皆敬尊 英雄美名世代传

Basic Training For English Writing

Step 1:brainstorming The qualities of a good friend

The qualities of a good friend (好朋友具有的品质)

The qualities of a good friend

Find the adjectives and write five of them on your finger.

Word puzzle
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u l u t k e

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q a h q i i

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t g o i n g

i
t g n i d g

e
b d e l d u

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r z s t f l

t
a v t b j i

e
v x t n s n

h
e a r t e d

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g o i n g e

Word puzzle
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t g o i n g

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t g n i d g

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b d e l d u

t
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a v t b j i

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v x t n s n

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e a r t e d

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g o i n g e

? 英语作文中描述人物品质的词汇
1.害羞的 shy

8.精力充沛的energetic 2.乐于助人的helpful 9.外向的out-going 3.友好的friendly/kind 10.勇敢的brave 4.安静的 quiet 11.诚实的honest 5.沉默的silent 12.热心肠的warm-hearted 6.耐心的 patient 13.容易相处的easy-going 7.仔细的careful

Basic Training For English Writing Step 2:information gap

张华 家庭住址 幸福路308号 性别 男

就读学校

第一中学

出生

1997年5月21日

爱好

广泛, 最爱足球和集邮

身高

1米8 善良,诚实, 大家都喜欢他

学习

各科都不错, 尤善英语

性格

Get your answer by asking questions: 通过互相提问获得缺失信息,为写作准备素材 live in

Where does he/she live?
Where does he/she study? What’re his/her hobbies? What does he/she do well in?

性别

Is Zhang Hua a boy or a girl?

study at

was born on

When was he/she born?

hobbies

tall/height

How tall is he?

Do well in

Character

What do you think of him/her?

Zhang Hua
No.308, Xingfu Road No.1 High School
all kinds of, favourite , play football collect stamps

live in

sex

a boy

study at

was born on

May 21st, 1997

hobbies

tall/height

1.8 metres tall with a height of 1.8m

do well in

all the subjects, Character esp. English

kind,honest everyone likes him

Basic Training For English Writing
Step 3:prewriting

How to describe a person

What aspects should be included?
1. 概况:age, birth, appearance 2. 性格:character/ personality 3. 爱好:hobby 4. 评价: evaluation (what you think of her)

? 英语作文中描述人物外貌的常用词语
1长/短头发 long/ short hair 2 活泼的 lively 3 可爱的 lovely 4强壮的 strong 5. 有大而明亮的眼睛的女孩 a girl with bright big eyes 6.戴眼镜的男孩 a boy with glasses

Sentence patterns
1. 概况:age, sex, birth, family background

…was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on… He spent his childhood in …
他出生在1995年, 现在16岁了. He was born in 1995 and is sixteen years old now. 2、外貌 / 性格/特长 我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着两只大眼睛, 留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.

? 英语作文中描述人物爱好的词汇

非常喜欢 much 对……感兴趣

I like … very He is interested

in…
对……极度喜欢 about… He is crazy

喜欢
fond of 擅长 最喜欢

enjoy/love/be
be good at His favourite…

is…

How to combine all the separate sentences into a real composition。 如何将这些零散的句子变成一篇流畅的文章?

Linking words
因果:because, as, for this reason, as a result, so…

转折:on the contrary, while,but,however, otherwise…
条件:so/as long as, in case, if , unless… 列举:first, at last, first(ly)…, second(ly)…, for one thing…, 递进:what’s more, besides, furthermore… 目的:so that, in order that, for the purpose… 总结:in a word, on the whole, all in all, in general…

范文赏析: 用英语写一篇短文, 介绍你朋友李华的基本情况.短文 应该包括下表所列全部内容: 姓 名: 性 别: 身 高: 出生年月: 就读学校: 特 长:
业余爱好: 性 格:

李飞 男 1.75米 1997年7月 晋州一中 英语、电脑、 (去年在全校英语竞赛中获第一名) 游泳、篮球、看书、流行音乐 为人友善,人见人爱

Model writing(参考范文): Li Fei, a boy who is 1.75 metres tall,was born in July, 1997. He studies at Jin Zhou No.1 High School. He likes computer and English best and he is very good at them. Moreover, He won first prize in the school English competition. In his spare time he enjoys reading and listening to popular music. His favorite sports are swimming and playing basketball. Since he is warm-hearted, everyone is fond of him.

Basic Training For English Writing

Step 4:writing

写作步骤
1 认真审题,确定需要表达的信息内容 把信息点写成简要的英语短语或简单句

2

3 4

信息重组,确定几句话的信息内容和次序

润色单词和句型,添加关联词,使上下文连贯

Model writing(参考范文): Li Fei, a boy who is 1.75 metres tall,was born in July, 1997. He studies at Jin Zhou No.1 High School. He likes computer and English best and he is very good at them. Moreover, He won first prize in the school English competition. In his spare time he enjoys listening to popular music and collecting stamps. His favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. Since he is warm-hearted, everyone is fond of him. Try to be different and creative!

Basic Training For English Writing

Step 5: peer checking

Error type 常见错误类型 1. verb tense/form 动词时态/形式 2. subject-verb agreement 主谓一致 3. word errors-用词错误 word choice; 选词 spelling;拼写 4. missing or unnecessary words 遗漏或不必要单词 5. sentence structure: 句子结构

Group work

组长收齐本组作文,按照图示 与箭头所指的相邻组交换作文

4

5

3

1

2

Exchange writings

Group work: choose the best one
Write and stick Handwriting
beautiful Structure perfect Link words correct Language wonderful

Which do you like best?
1. Handwriting 书写 2. Language 语言

3. Structure 句子结构
4. Link words 连词
beautiful fantastic wonderful perfect excellent

correct

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